

No Mans LandI sit next to her no more than a foot away As we both stare into our drinks with nothing to say.No Mans Land
I start to talk
as she does aswell Both conversations stop in our small silent hell.
She looks up
with a nervous smile a motion i would normally gaze at for a while.
Instead i smile back and she asks "whats wrong?" There is nothing to say but "For this moment i've waited so long."
She smiles at the table and stretches out her hand. and i stretch out mine to meet hers in that foot of no mans land.


Clear-Cut LoveDo i love her? Is that even a question to ask? wearing a smile on my face like a mask.Clear-Cut Love
Hiding a pain that stabs
at my heart everytime i look at you i feel a love that wont part.
I can never say the right thing when im around you. I never know the right thing you want me to do.
When i look at you i smile and bite back tears and i have to turn away till my eyes clears.
ANd when your eyes rest on mine my heart goes weaker. and as our skin meets it makes me judder.
If this world were perfect &


NO SurrenderThe heavens crack and open and rain falls like tears as if God had brocken down and surrendered to his fears.NO Surrender
And i look at you with water running down your face and the wet world couldnt stop me or slow down my pace.
My feet rising and falling splashing in the puddles desperately thinking of something to say but my heads all a muddle.
And we meet and embrace and kiss in the downpour and it feels like a chick flick i once saw.
And suddenly the city, people and rain all disapears because the two of us to


Tva ar sedanYou guessed you were wrong ThatTva ar sedan
Actually she really wasn’t that pretty That
Actually her teeth were too far apart
too skinny pretty bland really not that intelligent.
her hair not that special her skin not milky white her fingers nice
but not as nice as some
she had a bad accent hardly made any conversation and you’re better of now
anyway
Then you see her again
realise
you’re still fucked up
Outgrowth
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prob wont be for awhile tho =[ things are abit tough, need to find somewhere else to live soon...and with no money its abit impossible...eek.
hows things with u? hope all is well hugs xxx
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and yep, the boy with ash blonde hair is me. i remember writing that on the bus ride home from uni.
i wrote vodka porridge 2 days ago. was just lying on my bed and the first line came in my head. it's about a friend of mine. who used to drink a lot. through writing that poem i realised there was a lot of her in me. it also made me take a long hard look at myself.
humphery.
i just edited it, added two more verses.
i'm still going through a drafting stage. etc.
-humphery.
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Founder of *ExiledPoetry - Staff in *The-Last-Stanza - Member of *Apophysis and ~TheWord
"Living is easy with eyes closed, misunderstanding all you see..."
The Beatles, "Strawberry Fields"
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Founder of *ExiledPoetry - Staff in *The-Last-Stanza - Member of *Apophysis and ~TheWord
"Living is easy with eyes closed, misunderstanding all you see..."
The Beatles, "Strawberry Fields"
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---- Danielle Raak
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